Tattered Love by Lola Stark
Tattered Love by Lola StarkMy rating: 1 of 5 stars
Started this one earlier. Again, it was in the top for erotica on Amazon. I don't know what is going on with the Indie authors at the moment. They expect us to buy unpolished crap.
Page 9
"A chunky black belt with a large silver buckle teamed with a white wife beater tank under an open black short-sleeved button down shirt that showed off his art and ripped body completed his look." No...LOL. Hell no. That's like CODE for: STOP READING NOW
Page 9
He was just slightly taller at what a guess would be around six foot three, meaning even on my four-inch heels, I was craning my neck to look up at him. I don't even know what to say, though lazy comes to mind.
Still Page 9
"My hands twitched at the thought of rubbing my hands over his jet-black hair that was neatly buzzed close to his head."
I didn't make it past page 9. I'm giving it a one star.
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